Friday, January 4, 2013

Time's up

I strongly suggest you play the song while reading this entry.







I still remember, the first time I met you. The things around us, the people standing by, the dim lights shining upon us, the melting sound of rhythmic silence, the dark blue sky, me and you.

I came from a long trip. Exhausted when I reached home. I had my first step from the balcony, and everybody's glances were all at me. I gave them my smirk rather than smile, until I saw you for the first time.

You got me.

My eyes opened wide, but then they smiled. I still chose to sit at my favorite spot; at the end of the sofa. And you sat beside me. Leaned your head against me and I did the same. I already asked your name before. Not from you, but from them. That's our "time" together for the first time, but it's like we knew each other for a long time.

Days have passed, and I have to leave every after a certain point. A day without you is like a month already. I'm longing for our togetherness.

Nights have passed. The nearer the day I'll be with you, the more longing I get and patience to take.

Time came. We are together again. The joy I felt cannot be defined with a word, or even with words.

Time struck. I was in the middle of deep thoughts. You came. I was lying at my bed, and there you are again, lying next to me. Something hit me in an instant. My feelings for you, shattered little by little.
The closer you are to me, the further my sight reaches. You didn't know, and I just cannot tell you. I just came from a dark world where my "everything" has fallen and scattered into pieces. I now realized, I still live, love and can't leave my past.

I still remember that fine afternoon. The sun setting in the sky was very beautiful. The warmth it brought to us was smooth and so it was unforgettable.

The sun sets, and so do my warm feelings toward you. Cold.



Time flew. I became different. I kept my distance.

Time flies. Yet you stay the same.

Time has flown. Again, slowly, I started appreciating everything about you; your deeds, feelings, and you.

I was wrong. My thought that I cannot leave my past, was just so wrong. I'm glad you didn't give up on me. I'm so glad. We are together again.

Everyday seems like the first days. The settings, the people, the sound and the sky. Everything has fallen into places. Again. I'm so glad how blessed I was. I'm so glad.

Just like the first days, I still have to leave at every after a certain point. Leave you, and long for you. But this time, expect that I'll be home for you, and only for you. You're longing for my return, and so do I to see you.


The awaited day came at last.

I arrived home. Everything seems to be perfect in my own way. The road, the sky, the people, but the sound.

The sound. The rhythmic sound's gone. It faded.

Time took you from me. You're gone. Tears fell down from my eyes. The sorrow I felt cannot be described with just a word, or even words.

I remember that afternoon. The sun is setting in the sky. The warmth it brought to me was smooth and so it was the most unforgettable.

Sun sets, and so do life. Cold.


Got it here http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120917224727/creepypasta/images/0/00/Leaves_falling.jpg

Pao Kun's Thought 101:


How much funnier life can get. It is very playful. If everything is given, life will have no thrills. Giving you no blast. Boring. You cannot always get what you want.  Be thankful for what you have. 












118 comments:

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    1. the shortest comment I read from kamahalan...

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    2. Oo nga e. Di sya interesado. HAHAHAH!

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    3. tawag nga jan me-ma... ma-ma comment lang...

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    4. :'CC <---- Ganyan nga lang dapat ang icocomment ko. Nahiya naman ako kay Shaider :P

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    5. Tayo bioman, sya shaider? HAHAH!

      Feel ko naman ang komento mo arvin. Pramis. Kasi abot hanggang twitter. Appreciated ko nga e. :)

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  2. Anyare? Darating tapos aalis agad?

    Time took her from you? Sad...

    Ei, I just can't imagine the thought process you had to come up with this great poem. Can't be done without genuine emotions.
    I couldn't do anything to take it out from you. No one could...

    If time is the culprit, let the time heal the wounds of your past... Ganun!

    Namimihasa ka na sa English ha...
    Kung may pinagdadaanan ka man, that's part of growing up kiddo...
    Focus your attention to something else...like sa pagpapakulo ng H2O sa takure para hindi natutuyuan...

    Ganun.

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    1. sir anthony post mo? lol...peace!

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    2. Its not poem. (Yan kababago ko lang ng format). Ginawa kong paragraph by paragraph. Iba lang ang pagkakasulat kanina kaya hindi pwedeng pagsamasamahin.

      Gusto ko to senyor: If time is the culprit, let the time heal the wounds of your past...

      HAHAH! Oo, inglesero ang blog ko ngayon, ngayon lang! Makailang araw wala na din yan! :)

      At talagang naalala mo pa yung takure, nagbabasa kasi ako, tapos may naamoy nalang ako. HAHAHAH! iba na! ^_^

      Salamat sa mensahe!

      At natawa ko, wag mo na basagin ang trip ni kuya Tonio! HAHAH! kasi tama naman talaga, it's part of it.

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    3. Nangungulit lang... mukha naman kasing free versed poem...

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    4. Oo nga e. Baka mamisled din yung iba kaya binago ko na.

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  3. kasing bigat ng panahon ngayon dito ha. anyari sa atin hehehe pero sometimes there are situations in our life that help us grow in a lifetime, it may hurt us but it made us strong anyway. life must go on, dont stuck your life in one corner get out of the box and keep on learning. life is cruel and we have to live with that. (hirap ha napapaenglish na rin ako bahala na! hahaha)

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    1. mas mabigat ang panahon sa mga reyalidad mo ate lala. English lang ng english! Hindi yan mauubos! :))

      Life is cruel. Unfair! HAHAHAH!

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    2. oo tang inah! kasing bigat ng earth ang pasan ko sa mga nakaraang taon lol gawin light ang lahat! empi na empi lang ha! lol napapa english nga ako dito, hiyang hiya naman ako sayo kasi! hahahaha

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  4. hindi ko alam ang buong istorya Pao kasi nalito ako, aalis ang alaala then babalik. Mawawala then mararamdaman. Hindi ako magpapaka cool at babanat ng mature na advice kasi hindi pa ito ang buong kwento. Naramdaman ko pero marami pa din bagay dito sa mundo ang dapat natin ikasiya :D at ipagpasalamat.

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    1. tama...maraming reasons to be jolly...noh?

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    2. Post mo senyor? HAHAH! (ginaya lang kita! ^_^)

      Tama sir Tonio. Madaming pwedeng pagbalingan ng pansin at mapaglilibangan! :)

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    3. Hindi kasi ako makapag comment kung hindi ko alam ang story mo pao :)

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    4. Dont worry, ito'y adaptation lamang, tipong may touch of exaggeration na. HAHAH! Walang dying scenes. ^_^

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  5. ang seryoso naman nito at ang lungkot na may kaakibat pang malungkot na background music..parang naalala ko rito yung ending ng pirates of the caribean..konek? wala lang..siguro sa music hehe..

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    1. Tama. Hindi ko alam, bakit wala akong maisip na reply sayo! :) HAHAH! Nakaka Time struck kasi ang beauty mo ate Arline! oha! ^_^

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    2. magamit lang ang "time" ganyan?

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    3. Okay, sige star struck nalang! HAHAH!

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  6. waaah, anu ka ba Pao Kun. Ang lungkot naman nitong poem tapos may background music pang very melancholic T_T

    ayan nade-depress na naman ako.

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    1. Pasensya na sa bad vibes! Dont worry. Ito'y adaptation lamang. Walang kuhanan ng buhay na naganap. ^_^

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  7. ang hirap pag "time" ang kalaban di ba? now, you're togehter, the next thing you'll know, she was already gone. sad, but that's how life in this world....

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    1. Oo. Time talaga. Hindi mapipigilan. Ready ka man or not.

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  8. Ang lungkot ng love thoughts mo. Ang aga ha pang 4th day pa lang ng taon hehe. Don't worry love will find a way to your heart. Naks!

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    1. HAHAH! naisipan ko lang gumawa ng story. Mahilig lang talaga ako sa tragic. ^_^ Love will find a way! Anywhere we go, we're home if you are there beside me. ^_^ <- napakanta lang ng love will find a way. :)

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  9. Pinanindigan ang nosebleed na post? Haha.

    I'm familiar with the tune. Is it from a computer game?

    Anyway, I'm stabbed multiple times with your story. Ouch. My brain experienced an instant flashback. I hope my heart didn't.

    Sometimes, you realize the importance of someone when it's too late.

    Haha. Wooh. Nagdugo ilong ko dun. :)

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    1. Ayy gusto ko kasi maging worthwhile ang pagbisita mo dito. You know, for mental fitness kuya gointot! :)

      Kyoudai po ng Full Metal Alchemist. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_ddTqnOVhU

      Totoo. Kung pwede lang sana mag time travel pabalik no. But that just shows how powerless people are. We can only go back with our memories.

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    2. Yun pala yun! Paborito ko pa naman 'tong anime na 'to. :)

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  10. Lungkot ng background music T.T
    Kalungkot din ng scenario...
    pero ganyan ang reality, people come, people go...
    sometimes, people come back...

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    1. Tama po. Swerte pag nagbalik po no? We only have one life, we must value it, like once in a lifetime gift.

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    2. yes, we must value life.... minsan may gustong bumalik, pero nahihiya ng bumalik, ganyan talaga!

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    3. Gusto ko yung nahihiyang bumalik. HAHAHAH! Pakipot.

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  11. a very nostalgic entry...Inglatera ka nosebleed! Ganun pa man wala ka naman dapat iakalungkot dahil ang mga bagay nawala, marahil nawala dahil hinde ito talaga para sa atin... at may papalit na mas maganda... mas bongga at mas kapakipakinabang.

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    1. HAHAHAH Inglatera. Tama ka, may better na papalit pag nawala ang good. ^_^

      Kung anong ikinalungkot ng entry na to, ganun naman ka laftrip ang post mo! HAHAH!

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  12. Wag ng malungkot....SMILE! :D

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    1. smile parang nasa mental lang hahaha peace empi! gawing light!!

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  13. nanosebleed na nga ako, nalungkot pa ko sa post mo. hayyyyyyy

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    1. Pinagyayaman ko lang ang aing bokabolaryong pang banyaga. HAHAH!

      Nako, wag hayaan mawala ang good vibes sir Bino! :)

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  14. wala ko masabi.. ang lungkot.. sobra..pero dumadating naman talaga satin lahat yan.. kapit lang.. maydarating at darating.. inom na natin yan!!!hehehe

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    1. Yep! May darating din, pero may mga aalis din. Inom ba? HAHAHAH! Kaw talaga, aalis ka na ngat lahat ee! Tuloy ba? ^_^

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  15. isang magulo, masalimuot at nakakalungkot na love story,
    well ganun talaga minsan sa love
    mahirap matukoy kung san nga ba tutungo basta alam ko
    wala nang sasarap pa sa pakiramdam n mag mahal

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    1. HAHAH! Masarap magmahal, at mas masarap pag ikaw ang minamahal, at pinakamasarap pag nagmamahalan. Ayyie! Quota sa pag mamahal! :))

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  16. susme, daming alam ng time!

    hoho. kalungkot.. pero nagenjoy ako! :P

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    1. HAHAH! Oo, dami nya ngang alam! ^_^

      Thanks Jessica! Apir!

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  17. talagang kailangan may background music? hahaha pero sapul ako.... ayos ang music... idagdag pa na nagustuhan ko ung photo na nilagay mo sa huli...

    Umienglish ang level mo ngayon ha hehehe

    Isa lang masabi ko... ganyan talaga ang love... ramdam ko ung emosyon na binuhos mo dito...

    mukhang may pinaghugutan talaga hehehe

    Pero alam mo Pakundo... ang tagalog ko hindi mauubos pero ang english ko konting konti na lang mauubos na hahaha (copy lines lang yan hahaha)

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    1. Oo kailangan, para mas ma feel! :) Thanks!

      oo nga e, para maiba naman!

      Thanks!

      HAHAH! Adaptation lang mula sa tunay na buhay, but not exactly a replica.

      HAHAH! Natawa ko dito! Tingin ko mauubbusan na din ako! ^_^

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  18. nose and ear bleed ... hahahahaha cool lang sa buhay .... kekeme din yan! at pagkumeme yun iispluk mo na!

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    1. Keme at ispluk! Bahala na! HAHAHAH!

      mas kakanosebleed at earbleed ang vblog mo! :)) Mas coool! ^_^

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  19. Your story? Naka touch naman. Ang saya at ang lunkot. Anyway, hope everything will be better next time. Take care. It is really a lovely poem though.

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    1. Just an adaptation ate Joy. Added some melancholic touch at exagerated scenes. Thanks ate Joy! :))

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  20. Such a sad narration and very real as it can happen to anyone. I like the writing aspect of this entry, the emotions are over powering. Magaling ka palang sumulat at ako ay magbabalik.
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    1. Maraming salamat po sa pagbisita.

      Thanks din po sa mga compliments! ^_^

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  21. ang bigat naman :(..bakit nag kaganun?
    Sana sa susunod na pagsulat mo may happ ending :)

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    1. nag iiba ka na ng stilo pao o na didisclose na talaga ang lahat2x? char! hehehe

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    2. Syempre. nakakabagot din pag same ang istilo all through out! :D

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  22. so sad naman...kala ko patungo dun sa happy ending....masakit sa heart ung story..:O hap!


    xx!

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  23. Err.. Am I at the right blog of the funny boy Pao Kun? So sad... so English... lol

    Seriously, I like the open prose, the story and the music as well. It's a sad thought but I really like it. I'm a sucker for sad post yata :( Isa pa ngang ganito Pao!

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    1. HAHAH yes tama po ang napuntahan nyo. HAHAAH! Natawa ako sa so english!^_^

      sige po ttry ko po ulit. Mahilig din po ako sa mga tragedy story.

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  24. bongga to, may soundtrack talaga :)


    nice story - well written kahit sad. feel na feel ko ang sad ending :(

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    1. ganun talaga para mafeel!:)

      Odiba, epektib! ^__^

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  25. MAlungkot masyado.. I know kasi nawalan na din ako. Kaya cherish every moment

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    1. Yep tama. Salamat sa pag bisita June. ^_^ Mali pala spell ko ng name mo.

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    2. Oright. Para tipid. HAHAH!

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  26. ang sakit nmn. sana me reset button ang life para pag magkamali reset lng. oh kaya nman refresh para pag me ganitong thing sa past madaling malimutan

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    1. Tama ate Phioxee! kaso wala e, kaya move on nalang ano?

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  28. i remember Galadriel and Arwen sa bedded music....
    :'(

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    1. Lumolord op da rings ka ha. HAHAH!

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    2. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....

      pay-boar-wreath ko kaya ang LOTR....

      andun si Sadako di ba?

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  29. sooooooooooooooooooooooo.... sinong MAS may "PINAGDADAANAN" sa atin ngayon?
    lols ;)

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    1. yung totoo?????
      wahahahahaha.....

      *kain-lupa*

      ----shiyaroth---

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  30. may soundtrack pa ang emo post ni pao kun. :) hehehe.

    nice post by the way. parang malupit na pag-alon ng emosyon ang nabasa ko dun ah.

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    1. HAHAH! Actually habang tinatype ko to e nagpplay din yung music nayan.

      Tenks! :))

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  31. Waaahh ang daming comments, emo man ang unang post mo na nabasa ko eh nag enjoy parin ako sa kakulitan ng iba pang post mo...nakalimutan ko nasa work pala ako at kailangan ko nang magtrabaho...salamat sa comment mo sa blog ko...

    followed u na... mukhang mapapatambay ako dito ng madalas ah...

    PS: mahilig din ako sa aso at mag draw...pero di ko na nagagawa mag drawing ngaun....

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    1. HAHAHAH! salamat! Nako, baka mahuli ka jan sa work mo :))

      Salamat sa pag follow, at sa pag tambay! ^_^

      Sampol... sampol... :) Would love to see some of your works one day! ^_^

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  32. So, ito pala yong pinag-uusapan ng lahat! Ang maka nosebleed na post!

    Nag-uumapaw ang emosyon! And from the title itself, I remember this riddle from the movie The Hobbit:

    "This thing all things devours:
    Birds, beasts, trees, flowers;
    Gnaws iron, bites steel;
    Grinds hard stones to meal;
    Slays King, ruins town,
    And beats high mountain down.

    TIME'S UP!

    Sun sets, and so do life. Cold! This is so real that it hurts!

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    1. HAHAHAH! Hindi naman ng "lahat" :)) Talaga kayo kuya Mar! :)

      Sana makagawa din ako ng mga ganyang klaseng riddle!

      yes po totoo... if we could only stop time, or wind it back.

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    2. Aba! At kumukuya ka na dito! Feeling close ka na ah! hahaha

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    3. Hahahaha! Di pa ba tayo close nito? ahh oo nga hindi pa ata? feeling close lang ako. Haha!

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  33. at hindi ka pa nakapag update still nakabandera itong post mo na ito na super dugo pati tenge ko lol kaya sa susunod na mga activity ng pbo malamang ikaw na talaga ang opening at closing remarks hahaha go pao!!!

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    1. nahirapan akong mag isip ng isusunod! sabi ko pa naman art shift ang sunod ko, kaso di natuloy! HOHOHO!

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  34. Ang ganda nito.. at ang OST (o ha, umo-OST pa!) sapul. salamat sa pag-share ng kwento.

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    1. Salamat Pepe. :) Salamat din sa pag follow. Glad you liked it! OST yan ng FMA.

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  35. At talaga pina-play mo pa yun background music para mas lalong emo no? haha.. kaloka! Isang very emotional piece, mukhang malalim pinaghugutan neto ah.. I just can't agree with "time took her from you"? I guess it's the other way around.. you took your time away from her.. Masakit din yun no?! huhu #pataykanakarelateakonahawasaemo!

    :D

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    1. Syempre pang hatak ng emosyon ang music na yan. :))

      Ayy hindi ko nitake ang time from her. Time took her from me, she died. Ganyan. Oo masakit syempre. ^_^

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  36. It just give me chills whenever i read ur posts! Hands for you!Ikaw na...haha

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